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MLP: Fermata by BritishMindslave MLP: Fermata by BritishMindslave
My new MLP character! :'D

Her name is Fermata. I want her talent to be something like being able to hold notes longer than the others. It's a singing talent, yes. uvu

I wanted to design a character who had one bat wing and one pegasus wing without making the sue stereotype. What she has is a deformity. Because of this, she cannot fly. Also, not shown, her covered eye is slightly discolored. This is also from the same deformity.

She's quiet, but not completely shy. She loves to talk about music and she loves to cook. She's not very good at cooking, though, so watch out! If you bring up her wings, she'll get a bit sensitive unless she knows you. Even though she has this, she makes the most out of life. What's the point of crying about something you can't change?

Feedback is always appreciated!

Made in Paint Tool SAI
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YOU DO NOT HAVE PERMISSION TO USE THIS CHARACTER OR THIS ARTWORK FOR ANYTHING UNLESS YOU ASK ME AND I EXPLICITILY AND INDEFINITELY SAY "YES YOU MAY"
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MLP belongs to Hasbro
Character is mine!
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This is my first Critique so i hope its good.I LOVE IT.Its very good artwork you have here.It would be better if her back in the first part to not be so long and her eye shows alot of detail and its very original with the differnt wing types the eyes and the ears very original.If she did have a cutie mark it would show her personality maybe even a marking but im not saying to change it because this is yours you can do whatever you want with her.Many pony OCs are usually colorful and you changed that you made it look a bit less colorful so when you make art it would look alot more natural but if you were to use a colorful pony in a dark background it would look a bit crazy right.But i love it you could add some shading but thats up to you thank you for reading this and i hope it helped and gave you some ideas.
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Razzl3-Dazzl3 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aw she's really cute! I am curious though, is she still able to walk on clouds? 
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BritishMindslave Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You know, I never thought of that!
I'd think so, since she naturally is a Pegasus. She just can't get to them. xD At least not by normal means.
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Milliemewz Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
She's beautiful! And unique! 
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BritishMindslave Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks so much! I tried to make her unique, but not to the point where she stands out too much. C:
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Milliemewz Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You did a great job! 
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melodypony123321 Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
i love it!
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BritishMindslave Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks! uvu
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melodypony123321 Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
hehe
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Rebeccafairy Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow, this is such a gorgeous OC! Kinda reminds me of one of mine, who has a crippled wing.
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BritishMindslave Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you!
Her wing isn't crippled, per se, it just doesn't make sense for her to fly because of the way the wings work. It's a little more realistic, I guess xD
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