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MLP: Fermata by BritishMindslave MLP: Fermata by BritishMindslave
My new MLP character! :'D

Her name is Fermata. I want her talent to be something like being able to hold notes longer than the others. It's a singing talent, yes. uvu

I wanted to design a character who had one bat wing and one pegasus wing without making the sue stereotype. What she has is a deformity. Because of this, she cannot fly. Also, not shown, her covered eye is slightly discolored. This is also from the same deformity.

She's quiet, but not completely shy. She loves to talk about music and she loves to cook. She's not very good at cooking, though, so watch out! If you bring up her wings, she'll get a bit sensitive unless she knows you. Even though she has this, she makes the most out of life. What's the point of crying about something you can't change?

Feedback is always appreciated!

Made in Paint Tool SAI
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YOU DO NOT HAVE PERMISSION TO USE THIS CHARACTER OR THIS ARTWORK FOR ANYTHING UNLESS YOU ASK ME AND I EXPLICITILY AND INDEFINITELY SAY "YES YOU MAY"
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Character is mine!
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melodypony123321 Apr 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
i love it!
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BritishMindslave Apr 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks! uvu
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melodypony123321 Apr 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
hehe
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Rebeccafairy Mar 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow, this is such a gorgeous OC! Kinda reminds me of one of mine, who has a crippled wing.
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BritishMindslave Mar 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you!
Her wing isn't crippled, per se, it just doesn't make sense for her to fly because of the way the wings work. It's a little more realistic, I guess xD
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Rebeccafairy Mar 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh, wait. Fermata has her cutie mark too, doesn't she? Oops, forget that last part. XP
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Rebeccafairy Mar 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh, of course. Still, she just kinda caught my eye because of the similarity. (Of course, mine has discovered her talent already, but that doesn't really matter.)
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BritishMindslave Mar 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah, this one's a little older. At this point I hadn't come up with a cutie mark. xD It's not stated in here, so it's all good.
Great minds think alike, though, huh? xD I wanted to do a pony that I know a lot of people would do (one bat wing, one regular wing) and make her a good character (as opposed to what a lot of the other renditions happen to be).
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Rebeccafairy Mar 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
That sort of "take a really overused trait and make it unique" type thing, huh? I can relate. That's actually something I've been trying to do in my stories. Though, I'm not always very good at it.
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BritishMindslave Mar 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Yep, that's the thing. I like to make things that are a little different, but still fit in.
And hey, as long as you're not doing the same thing everyone else is doing, I'm sure you're doing fine. xD
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