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MLP: Fermata

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My new MLP character! :'D

Her name is Fermata. I want her talent to be something like being able to hold notes longer than the others. It's a singing talent, yes. uvu

I wanted to design a character who had one bat wing and one pegasus wing without making the sue stereotype. What she has is a deformity. Because of this, she cannot fly. Also, not shown, her covered eye is slightly discolored. This is also from the same deformity.

She's quiet, but not completely shy. She loves to talk about music and she loves to cook. She's not very good at cooking, though, so watch out! If you bring up her wings, she'll get a bit sensitive unless she knows you. Even though she has this, she makes the most out of life. What's the point of crying about something you can't change?

Feedback is always appreciated!

Made in Paint Tool SAI
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YOU DO NOT HAVE PERMISSION TO USE THIS CHARACTER OR THIS ARTWORK FOR ANYTHING UNLESS YOU ASK ME AND I EXPLICITILY AND INDEFINITELY SAY "YES YOU MAY"
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Character is mine!
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
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This is my first Critique so i hope its good.I LOVE IT.Its very good artwork you have here.It would be better if her back in the first part to not be so long and her eye shows alot of detail and its very original with the differnt wing types the eyes and the ears very original.If she did have a cutie mark it would show her personality maybe even a marking but im not saying to change it because this is yours you can do whatever you want with her.Many pony OCs are usually colorful and you changed that you made it look a bit less colorful so when you make art it would look alot more natural but if you were to use a colorful pony in a dark background it would look a bit crazy right.But i love it you could add some shading but thats up to you thank you for reading this and i hope it helped and gave you some ideas.